The Tragedy
Halloween is Loveday's favourite holiday and she has written a scary story to celebrate it. She has used puppet pals to publish her story and she decided that it's title was 'The tragedy'. Watch the video and leave Loveday a comment to let her know what you think.
27 comments:
We liked your story.
I liked the way you said Malfoy had ribs and how did you have a heart attack?
I like your movie.
How did you go in the graveyard? Did your Mum know you were in the graveyard? How did Malfoy turn into a zombie?
I loved it when you got buried in the ground. It was truly a tragedy.
Andrea.
Poor Malfoy.How did Malfoy turn into a zombie? Where did you last
see Malfoy? Were you sad? If I
had a cat and it was turn into a
zombie i will cry for 99000 years.
lucky Malfoy is o.k.Was it a long
way to the graveyard?
Wow. Great story! It really was a tragedy!! I like the photos you took of yourself to use in it. You are very clever and I love you. Stay away from zombies!!!
I liked about the story that you made. I liked your whispering.
I liked the part when Loveday said, "Where is Malfoy?'
I liked the talking
I like her story
I like how you used your own background. Did you draw that graveyard and take a photo of it?
It was great and I like the picture.
I liked the part when she was scared of the zombies and when she died that was so sad.
I didn't like when Loveday died because of the zombies.
Gosh Loveday, your death was a tragedy. I love the way you said, "Zombies!"
Great story loveday and you are a clever reader.
it was coooooooooooooool i just want to hear it again!
Wow loveday that story was very cool. I liked the part when you said I had a heart attack. I was very impress.
That was very sad. I like the way you said heart attack.
That was really sad at the ending when you had a heart attack and died.
did your mother came to the gave yad and Look for you Loveday.
I LIKE YOUR STORY
I like how you made yoru move
Angelina said.... That was amazing loveday you have a lot of expression. I almost cry when you got buried in the ground. But I did not like the Zombie. The Zombies are very very mean. If you see another zombie tell them to leave you alone.
did you Turn in to a zombie.
What nice reading loveday.
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