Noelani has written an imaginative story using lots of great descriptive words. She has also illustrated her story using paint. Great work Noelani, I can't wait to read more of your stories.
WOW Noelani, your illustration for your story is amazing. You need to come into A4 to show some of us how to use Microsoft Paint to draw pictures for our stories.
Did you stand on your serfbod and hod on the dofin and did you find some more fried findo and was it so fun when you have a lot of frend dofin and did you have some more shak frend to and did you like standing on your serfbod Noelani.
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I think I'd like to go surfing too.
Was it fun?
I liked Noelani's story.
I like your story.
What a great imagination you have, Noelani. What is it like swimming with the dolphins and the sharks?
was it cool
was it fun
I love your story ill probly fell
sad if you never tirnd homin agin
Who did you go with
WOW Noelani, your illustration for your story is amazing. You need to come into A4 to show some of us how to use Microsoft Paint to draw pictures for our stories.
Miss Lepou
did the shrak say some thing
katie looks prite
i like your story
great story noelani, it sounds like you had fun! so exciting
what a lovely story
was it fun playing with the dofin and did you simm with the dofin and did the dofin took you to the botm to the sea.
Did you stand on your serfbod and hod on the dofin and did you find some more fried findo and was it so fun when you have a lot of frend dofin and did you have some more shak frend to and did you like standing on your serfbod Noelani.
i thingk i wohd not like sifing
It was fun jerome and katie
It was relly cool jerome
I falt that I was free
Ms Mulrennan
Are you sure loveday it is a bit
sceary when I srfe. You muat dont
want to srfe ok.
whydid you like my story shubhreet?
They did took me to the bottm of the sea Shirley.
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