Thursday, February 9, 2012
Super Jerome
We have started story writing this week and everyone is writing really interesting stories. Here is one Jerome wrote about being a super hero. The ending is unexpected, listen to the story and tell us why you think Jerome said what he did. The movie was recorded by Jerome with the help of Noelani.
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25 comments:
Wow Jerome, what an imaginative story! I am surprised that you didn't want to be Superman.
Miss Lepou
I'm glad you got your life back! Your story was very nice and you read it with a clear voice.
I don't Jerome likes to be a superhero because he has to save women and old ladies from cliffs.
I liked your clear voice Jerome.
He doesn't like being a superhero because he will fall down.
Maybe when he doesn't know how to control his powers I could help because I was superman once.
He might be scared of heights.
It is great homework
jerome look hancim
How did you trun into superman
i like your story
I think jerome is a super hero
It was cool
you are super jerome
It was fun
I trun in to a holk and then I was half hulk and half ironman, I was big.
was the tnadow big
you read your story very clearly
Did you have powers
i like your story
wow! Cool stoy
did you save miss mac jerome
Cool story
Hey Jerome funny story, why did you scream.
how did you fly?
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