Wednesday, March 23, 2011

The Monster at the Window

Deziah wrote a scary story!  What do you think will happen next?

Untitled from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.

10 comments:

Lolo said...

The window will open and the monster will come in the window.

Noelani said...

The monster might open the window and put Deziah in a bag and run away to his house to hide her.

Malik said...

The monster will sneak up and open the door and Deziah will go out the window and the monster will go and gobble her up.

Nicholas said...

The monster came inside and he wanted to scare the people and the children. Everyone was scared

Elijah said...

Nice story Deziah. Everyone in A2 got scared because of the scary monster.

Rajpreet said...

Hey Deziah, Were you scared when you heard the knock on the window?

Unknown said...

That is a scary story Deziah. I hope you turned off all of the lights so that the monster went away. I will have to keep my windows closed tonight.

Deziah said...

Yes I was scared.

Noelani said...

the monster is friendl Deziah

paki said...

l likeb your story;