In the first week of term three we read The Fun Bus by Jill Eggleton.
We enjoyed it so much we decided to make our own fun bus.
Some of the children also wrote stories about thier fun bus. Shirley has worked hard to make a video of their stories using imovie. We hope you enjoy them.
14 comments:
I liked Ron's story because he told how the elephant squashed them.
How slow was the bus going Noelani?
Paki used a big voice when the giraffe squashed him.
Paki spec god.
i like your storey about the fun bus wen the giraf sgwosg you
Wow A3, I think your Fun Bus mural looks great! Great job Shirley, it is not easy to make a video made up of 5 stories! Your editing was very good.
I like how you all read. It was good that Noelani used a simile in her story.
You guys have a good clear reading voice.
I like his story
why WAS THE graffE alawd to sit on you?
WHY DID THE peoplE ON THE bus shottid
good job
I likd when paki sidi no i dot want to sit on you.
I like The cmment bib cizs You Made
The caek
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