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Friday, March 16, 2012

The Monster

Nerilyn worked very hard on her story yesterday and she has created a scary monster story! Listen to Nerilyn read her story and tell us what you would do if you heard a monster creeping into your room.


8 comments:

  1. Nerilyn, this is a wonderful story. I hope the monster does not come into my bedroom. I wonder what colour it was?
    Mrs Eden Richmond Primary.

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  2. That was really scary!

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  3. I think it was very scary because the monster will eat you when you are sleeping.

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  4. Did the monster scare you?

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  5. I liked your story because it was a good story.

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  6. but is that your moster

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  7. i like your story Nerilyn

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