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Tuesday, March 27, 2012

The Monster, by Vicky

Vicky has written a great story with a clear beginning middle and end.  Listen to her story and let us know what you would do if a monster ate you. 

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16 comments:

  1. RonMarch 27, 2012 at 9:08 AM

    Why did the monster eat the girl?

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  2. JeromeMarch 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    How did the monster eat you?

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  3. NicoleMarch 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    Did the monster eat Vicky?

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  4. NerilynMarch 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    Was she scared?

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  5. LovedayMarch 27, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    I think I would be very scared if a monster came and ate me.

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  6. OliverMarch 28, 2012 at 9:04 AM

    I will choke the monsters throat and his eyes will pop out.

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  7. AndyMarch 28, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    I will fight the monster from the inside.

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  8. AryiMarch 28, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    I will get my magic sword and the monster will die.

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  9. HenryMarch 28, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    I will cut his nose.

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  10. EDRINMarch 28, 2012 at 12:54 PM

    Jerome YOU Have A Grat SOEY AND I LIKE YOU SOEY

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  11. UnknownMarch 28, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Great story, Vicky. It had a very clear beginning, middle and end. If I was stuck in a monster's stomach, I would tickle it and maybe it would sneeze and I would fly out. AAAACCCHHOOOO!
    Miss Lepou

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  12. Ivan and Gaureesh A7March 29, 2012 at 9:12 AM

    I liked your story. You had a great imagination.

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  13. Deago A7March 29, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    That was very clear reading Vicky.

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  14. RachelApril 2, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    Do the monster eat you to

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  15. TarikMay 21, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    Did you screem?!!!

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  16. ENNIEJune 9, 2012 at 4:05 PM

    WHAT A LOVELY STORY. I ENJOINED READING IT VICKY

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