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Monday, February 20, 2012

The Wave

Noelani has written an imaginative story using lots of great descriptive words.  She has also illustrated her story using paint.  Great work Noelani, I can't wait to read more of your stories. 



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24 comments:

  1. LovedayFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    I think I'd like to go surfing too.

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  2. KatieFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Was it fun?

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  3. RachaelFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    I liked Noelani's story.

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  4. ShubhreetFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    I like your story.

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  5. Ms MulrennanFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    What a great imagination you have, Noelani. What is it like swimming with the dolphins and the sharks?

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  6. jeromeFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:30 PM

    was it cool

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  7. JeromeFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    was it fun

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  8. hayzelFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    I love your story ill probly fell
    sad if you never tirnd homin agin

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  9. JeromeFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    Who did you go with

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  10. UnknownFebruary 24, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    WOW Noelani, your illustration for your story is amazing. You need to come into A4 to show some of us how to use Microsoft Paint to draw pictures for our stories.

    Miss Lepou

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  11. kietFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:46 PM

    did the shrak say some thing

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  12. edrinFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    katie looks prite

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  13. shubhreetFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    i like your story

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  14. Leisha ah kuoiMarch 1, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    great story noelani, it sounds like you had fun! so exciting

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  15. HAYZELMarch 3, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    what a lovely story

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  16. ShirleyMarch 14, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    was it fun playing with the dofin and did you simm with the dofin and did the dofin took you to the botm to the sea.

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  17. shirleyMarch 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    Did you stand on your serfbod and hod on the dofin and did you find some more fried findo and was it so fun when you have a lot of frend dofin and did you have some more shak frend to and did you like standing on your serfbod Noelani.

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  18. HAYZELMarch 22, 2012 at 12:30 PM

    i thingk i wohd not like sifing

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  19. NoelaniMarch 22, 2012 at 12:55 PM

    It was fun jerome and katie

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  20. NoelaniMay 10, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    It was relly cool jerome

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  21. NoelaniMay 17, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    I falt that I was free
    Ms Mulrennan

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  22. NoelaniMay 24, 2012 at 2:56 PM

    Are you sure loveday it is a bit
    sceary when I srfe. You muat dont
    want to srfe ok.

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  23. NoelaniMay 31, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    whydid you like my story shubhreet?

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  24. NoelaniMay 31, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    They did took me to the bottm of the sea Shirley.

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