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Thursday, February 9, 2012

Super Jerome

We have started story writing this week and everyone is writing really interesting stories.  Here is one Jerome wrote about being a super hero.  The ending is unexpected, listen to the story and tell us why you think Jerome said what he did.  The movie was recorded by Jerome with the help of Noelani.


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25 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 10, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    Wow Jerome, what an imaginative story! I am surprised that you didn't want to be Superman.

    Miss Lepou

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  2. A7February 10, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    I'm glad you got your life back! Your story was very nice and you read it with a clear voice.

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  3. NoelaniFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    I don't Jerome likes to be a superhero because he has to save women and old ladies from cliffs.

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  4. KatieFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    I liked your clear voice Jerome.

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  5. TareenaFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    He doesn't like being a superhero because he will fall down.

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  6. JettFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Maybe when he doesn't know how to control his powers I could help because I was superman once.

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  7. NicoleFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    He might be scared of heights.

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  8. C S.February 11, 2012 at 2:44 AM

    It is great homework

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  9. EdrinFebruary 20, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    jerome look hancim

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  10. BonnieFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    How did you trun into superman

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  11. RooshanFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:41 PM

    i like your story

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  12. hayzel katieFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    I think jerome is a super hero

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  13. kayaFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:57 AM

    It was cool

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  14. RonFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:59 AM

    you are super jerome

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  15. kayaFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    It was fun

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  16. jettFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    I trun in to a holk and then I was half hulk and half ironman, I was big.

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  17. shirleyFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    was the tnadow big

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  18. RachaelFebruary 28, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    you read your story very clearly

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  19. NicoleMarch 1, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    Did you have powers

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  20. rooshanMarch 15, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    i like your story

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  21. LovedayMarch 15, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    wow! Cool stoy

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  22. hayzelMay 3, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    did you save miss mac jerome

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  23. Hayden D3May 21, 2012 at 12:59 PM

    Cool story

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  24. StephenJune 5, 2012 at 10:42 AM

    Hey Jerome funny story, why did you scream.

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  25. LovedayAugust 20, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    how did you fly?

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