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Sunday, February 19, 2012

The Good Dream, by Ron

Ron has written his first story of the year and it's all about a great dream he had.  He planned his story carefully and included two ideas, well done Ron.  Have a listen and let us know what you dream about.


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10 comments:

  1. Learning TogetherFebruary 20, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    A great story Ron. When I dream I dream that my footy team Collingwood wins the grand final! That makes me very happy.
    Keep up the great writing!
    From Mrs Kennedy

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  2. NoelaniFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:08 AM

    Was there one million dollars in the trophy?

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  3. KayaFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:08 AM

    Was it fun?

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  4. KrishiFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    We like your story because it was funny because you said you won the race but it was only a dream.

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  5. TareenaFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    Was your Mum happy?

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  6. kobiFebruary 20, 2012 at 12:38 PM

    who a wandfol story ron

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  7. shubhreetFebruary 20, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    a nice story

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  8. A2February 20, 2012 at 1:15 PM

    What a great story Ron, I liked how you read your story. Was it a running race?

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  9. Ms MulrennanFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    Hi Ron. I liked your story. I bet it was a running race because you are a fast runner.

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  10. katieFebruary 24, 2012 at 2:02 PM

    I like your story

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