Friday, May 11, 2012

Mr Fox, by Tanzeela

Tanzeela is new to our class and she has written a fantastic Fantastic Mr Fox story.  Well done Tanzeela on your first movie, it is great to have you in the class.


19 comments:

Ron said...

You spoke clearly.

Tareena said...

That was a great story and you spoke clearly

Edrin said...

That was a fantastic story.

Miss Mac said...

I like the way you said the foxes dug and dug because it let me know that the foxes were digging for a long time.

Loveday said...

I think Mrs Fox would be very happy with the food.

Krishicant said...

Ded The Fox Eat Food?

Ron said...

DID dig and did ? Mrfox

Ron said...

Did Mr fox dig and dig?

Edrin said...

That is A Fantastik stoy tanzeela?

Unknown said...

What a fantastic first video, Tanzeela. You read your story very clearly. Welcome back to Papatoetoe East School.

Edrin said...

Tanzeela I Like your story

Kanye said...

I like that story tazeela.

Edrin said...

Tanzeeal that was a grat stoy tanzeeal and I like the way you Rad your stoy and I liked it because you spoked clele and Iliked your stoy?

katie said...

I like how you yoused your vose.

Hayzel said...

that was a grat story tanzeela.

Tareena said...

I like That yoow spok kele and was it hop that THay got Stuk in the tree dan on the mis tufos hom.

hayzel said...

did the fox die

Hayzel said...

what did miss fox say?

Shirley said...

Did the mother fox loves the three baby and the Father Fox?