Nerilyn, this is a wonderful story. I hope the monster does not come into my bedroom. I wonder what colour it was?Mrs Eden Richmond Primary.
That was really scary!
That was spooky
I think it was very scary because the monster will eat you when you are sleeping.
Did the monster scare you?
I liked your story because it was a good story.
but is that your moster
i like your story Nerilyn
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Nerilyn, this is a wonderful story. I hope the monster does not come into my bedroom. I wonder what colour it was?
Mrs Eden Richmond Primary.
That was really scary!
That was spooky
I think it was very scary because the monster will eat you when you are sleeping.
Did the monster scare you?
I liked your story because it was a good story.
but is that your moster
i like your story Nerilyn
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