Ron has written his first story of the year and it's all about a great dream he had. He planned his story carefully and included two ideas, well done Ron. Have a listen and let us know what you dream about.
A great story Ron. When I dream I dream that my footy team Collingwood wins the grand final! That makes me very happy. Keep up the great writing! From Mrs Kennedy
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A great story Ron. When I dream I dream that my footy team Collingwood wins the grand final! That makes me very happy.
Keep up the great writing!
From Mrs Kennedy
Was there one million dollars in the trophy?
Was it fun?
We like your story because it was funny because you said you won the race but it was only a dream.
Was your Mum happy?
who a wandfol story ron
a nice story
What a great story Ron, I liked how you read your story. Was it a running race?
Hi Ron. I liked your story. I bet it was a running race because you are a fast runner.
I like your story
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