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Friday, May 11, 2012

Mr Fox, by Tanzeela

Tanzeela is new to our class and she has written a fantastic Fantastic Mr Fox story.  Well done Tanzeela on your first movie, it is great to have you in the class.


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19 comments:

  1. RonMay 11, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    You spoke clearly.

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  2. TareenaMay 11, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    That was a great story and you spoke clearly

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  3. EdrinMay 11, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    That was a fantastic story.

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  4. Miss MacMay 11, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    I like the way you said the foxes dug and dug because it let me know that the foxes were digging for a long time.

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  5. LovedayMay 11, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    I think Mrs Fox would be very happy with the food.

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  6. KrishicantMay 11, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    Ded The Fox Eat Food?

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  7. RonMay 11, 2012 at 10:01 AM

    DID dig and did ? Mrfox

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  8. RonMay 11, 2012 at 10:05 AM

    Did Mr fox dig and dig?

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  9. EdrinMay 11, 2012 at 10:46 AM

    That is A Fantastik stoy tanzeela?

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  10. UnknownMay 11, 2012 at 1:16 PM

    What a fantastic first video, Tanzeela. You read your story very clearly. Welcome back to Papatoetoe East School.

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  11. EdrinMay 14, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Tanzeela I Like your story

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  12. KanyeMay 15, 2012 at 12:18 PM

    I like that story tazeela.

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  13. EdrinMay 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM

    Tanzeeal that was a grat stoy tanzeeal and I like the way you Rad your stoy and I liked it because you spoked clele and Iliked your stoy?

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  14. katieMay 17, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    I like how you yoused your vose.

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  15. HayzelMay 17, 2012 at 12:41 PM

    that was a grat story tanzeela.

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  16. TareenaMay 18, 2012 at 10:49 AM

    I like That yoow spok kele and was it hop that THay got Stuk in the tree dan on the mis tufos hom.

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  17. hayzelMay 19, 2012 at 1:59 PM

    did the fox die

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  18. HayzelMay 21, 2012 at 3:47 PM

    what did miss fox say?

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  19. ShirleyMay 23, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    Did the mother fox loves the three baby and the Father Fox?

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