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Wednesday, March 23, 2011

The Monster at the Window

Deziah wrote a scary story!  What do you think will happen next?

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10 comments:

  1. LoloMarch 23, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    The window will open and the monster will come in the window.

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  2. NoelaniMarch 23, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    The monster might open the window and put Deziah in a bag and run away to his house to hide her.

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  3. MalikMarch 23, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    The monster will sneak up and open the door and Deziah will go out the window and the monster will go and gobble her up.

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  4. NicholasMarch 23, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    The monster came inside and he wanted to scare the people and the children. Everyone was scared

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  5. ElijahMarch 23, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    Nice story Deziah. Everyone in A2 got scared because of the scary monster.

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  6. RajpreetMarch 23, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    Hey Deziah, Were you scared when you heard the knock on the window?

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  7. UnknownMarch 24, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    That is a scary story Deziah. I hope you turned off all of the lights so that the monster went away. I will have to keep my windows closed tonight.

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  8. DeziahMarch 24, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    Yes I was scared.

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  9. NoelaniMarch 29, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    the monster is friendl Deziah

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  10. pakiMarch 29, 2011 at 2:40 PM

    l likeb your story;

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