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Thursday, February 24, 2011

School By Noelani

Noelani has been working on writing more then one idea in her stories and today she went away and wrote a story with lots of ideas all by herself.  Excellent work Noelani, I can't wait to read your next story. 

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12 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 25, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    Wow Noelani, you had so many ideas in your story. We have a Smarty Pants in our classroom, too.

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  2. AlizayeFebruary 25, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    I like your story.

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  3. Aloysius A4February 25, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    That was a nice story.

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  4. Katie A4February 25, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    I love your story.

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  5. Avantika A4February 25, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    I like Noelani's story.

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  6. HAYZELFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    I LIKE YOUR STORY NOELANI

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  7. Nicole SwannFebruary 25, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    What a great story Noelani. We think that you are very clever writing all those ideas about school.
    from Prep S (Melbourne, Australia)

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  8. OFAFebruary 25, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    i like your story

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  9. deziahFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    I liked listening to your story.

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  10. katie hayzelMarch 4, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    that was a good stor.

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  11. hayzelMarch 5, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    Hi your story was very cool.

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  12. katieMarch 10, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    i love your story

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